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After the Fire

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Smoldering.

Dreams gone.

Only ash remains.
What could it be that burned down? Maybe a home? Perhaps a business?

#SixWordStories' Theme Prompt: Smoke.
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3wyl's avatar
Fire can be pretty effective in that sense. =/

It's interesting because it almost feels as if fire erased the dreams... as if dreams were tangible there?

I think it says a lot that you merge the intangibility of the dreams with the tangibility of ashes and fire itself.

Great stuff. :nod: