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Soda Shoppe

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Crimson sweetness.  Two teenagers.  Ah, memories!
#SixWordStories' Theme Prompt: Cherry Soda.

I know it sounds old fashioned, but it's something charming I've always liked. There's a fifties diner around this area that I've wished I could take a date to and just share a cherry soda like this...
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3wyl's avatar
Aww... this is awesome. :D

I really like the lightness that is evident in the exclamation mark used at the end, as well as the personal exclamation in 'Ah' there.

The concept is brilliant and the phrasing is pretty cool as well. I like the way you have broken the whole thing up into three parts... three fragments as if to emphasise different snapshots of it all, different details and so on?

The way you've set it out is pretty cool, anyway.

Not bad. :la: